Wednesday, March 24, 2010

shaam ki thandak..


It was 7 pm. ..cold yet soft breezes n the warmth of my thoughts was makin me feel…” wow..”..!
1-2 lines came to my mind n after 10 min…I made this..just have a look…

Shaam ki thandak,
Kuch kehti hai mujhse…
Chaand ki chandni,
Kuch kehti hai mujhse…
Jab chhooti hai ye , mulayam hawa..
Pattiyo ki sarsarahat ..
Kuch kehti hai mujhse…
Hawao me aaj mehak hai aisi,
Chhukar meri aatma ko, meri masumiyat..
Kuch kehti hai mujhse..
Sham ki lalima ,
Chhayi hui hai , kuch aisi raat pe.
Jaise meri he kahani,
Ye kehti hai mujhse..
Panchhiyo ka chehakna,
Khayalo ka mehakna..
Kuch to khaas hai,
Jindgi..kehti hai mujhse…!!!

5 comments:

  1. gr8 wrk...
    beautiful description in such simple way...too guud!!

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  2. just one word beautiful :)
    great work, keep writing.....

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  3. Very good work 1nce again keep it up..........u realy rock....

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