Saturday, March 27, 2010

Ab toh chale aao...



Frnds this is my new creation…n I just luveddddddd it..after writing this..i can proudly say tht ..yeah I write well….! M just too gud…I knw u ppl..must be thinking ..tht m praising myself..but I just luv this poem…
For adding more..muje kailash kher ke song ki 2 lines yaad aa rahi hai..

“ heere moti me na chaahu..me toh chaahu sangam tera..”..! chk this out…


Tere aane ka intezaar hai..
Tujhe pane ka intezaar hai..
Hazaaro lakho ki bheed me ..
Tere mil jaane ka intezaar hai..

Iss khawahish ke poore hone ka intezaar hai..
Tere liye kuch kar gujarne ka intezaar hai..
Vaqt lagta hai pyaar ki raaho me..
Par inn raho se gujrarna ek baar hai…
Tere mil jaane ka intezaar hai…

Dil ka tootna , jaise nishani hai pyaar ki..
Milke bichhadna ..kahani hai pyaar ki..
Jinme , khud ke hone ka hosh nahi rehta..
Aise khayalo me kho jaane ka intezaar hai..
Tere mil jaane ka intezaar hai…





Kabhi darta hai, mann jamaane se..
Ghabrata hai..tere na aane se..
Pal pal aankhe dhoondti hai tujhe..
Tere aake na jaane ka intezaar hai.
Tere mil jaane ka intezaar hai…

Sapne poore hone ka intezaar hai..
Jindgi jeene ka intezaar hai..
Kab ye intezaar khatam hoga..
Ab iss baat ka intezaar hai….

6 comments:

  1. Truly, this one is wayyyyyy tooooooooo good, luvd all lines but best one was
    Jinme , khud ke hone ka hosh nahi rehta..
    Aise khayalo me kho jaane ka intezaar hai..

    humme bhi aapki un khusiyo ke aane ka intezaar hai.....
    grtt work..
    Keep writing :)

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  2. well done priyanka.....u deserve applaud.....
    n thnxxx rashu...4 evrything...

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  3. Simply mindblowing ..............i realy like your work............
    mujhe bhi aapse mil kar autograph lene ka vichar hey...........

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  4. oh sure why not...mujhe bhi kisi ko autograph dene ka intezaar hai...hahaha....
    thanxxx a lot...

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  5. hey mam hum to hamesha kehte the u write too gud...par ab to certified ho gaya...sach kya likha hai...very romantic..hmmmm

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