Saturday, May 1, 2010

vo shaam ....


जब चाँद बादल में छुप जाता है..
दिल में युहीं एक ख्याल आता है..
काश ये पल यही रुक जाये..
पर कैसे ये यकीन आये ,
कभी दिल को जो चाहे मिल पाता है ...??
वो बादलो में कुछ यु सिमटता है..
जैसे कोई टूटा हुआ सपना बिखरता है...
अँधेरे के साए में छिपती लकीर रह जाती है..
न देके भी , कुछ न कुछ तकदीर दे जाती है..
धीरे धीरे वो गुम सा हो जाता है..!
जाते जाते ..बाकि निशा रह जाता है...
ये लम्हे बस यांदें बन जाते है..
जो अपनी महक से ..
दिल को महकाते है....!!!

10 comments:

  1. jab chaand yu chup jaata hai,
    dil hi dil ko samjhata hai,
    phir niklega vo intezaar kar,
    bus thoda toh aitbaar kar,
    saath nhi chodega vo, thoda yu behlata hai,
    hum hus dete inn baaton pe uski,
    amaavas ke din vo tanhai jo de jaata hai....

    Beautifully written poem, bus aap yuhi likhte rahiye, taaki humaari creativity ko khi jung naa lag jaaye...
    Actually ur poems inspires me to write, and so i just can't control myself, i hope u dnt mind...

    N surely beautiful poem, keep writing :)

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  2. NO YAAR...ACTULLY U COMPLETE MY POEMS ...
    EXCELLENT...IS THE WORD 4 U.....
    SAMAJH NAHI AA RAHA...APNI POEM KI TAARIF KARU YA TERI.....:)

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  3. jab chand badal mein chup jata hai
    intezaar ka lamha de jata hai
    kyun kisi ka intezar karen
    kyun yeh hi arzoo baar baar karen
    hazaron taron mein chand hi kyun
    aao taron ka bhi deedar karen

    na tanhai rahegi
    na lamhe judai rahegi
    na gum ka ehsaas hoga
    na dil ke itna koi pass hoga
    jab koi chahat hogi kabhi ya hogi kabhi dil ki tamanna
    bol dena taron ko , woh tootkar apke liye qurbaan hoga

    aur kisse pata phir ek din aisa bhi aye
    jab humme chand ka nai chand ko humare nikalne ka intezaar hoga

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  4. hey poem was excellent
    nd so was excellence in the completion by rashu

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  5. @ shweta
    Thanks shweta but ur one is simply outstanding yaat, lagta ab apan teeno ko collaboration mein kaam karna chahiye :)

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  6. hey shweta its just mind blowing......gr88888...!

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  7. mai toh kab se keh rahi thi
    ek se bhale do
    do se bhale teen
    aaao milke banaye apni zindagi rangeen

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  8. gr8 wrk by gang of 3!!!!!
    maine to backout kar diya yaaron..main itna accha nahin likh sakti!!

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  9. gr8 job by three of u realy like all the poems written by u amazing and uncanny creativity by all of u..........I am saying 3 genious rather thn 3 poets or writters or blogers...........I like three of u start writing few morw things in collaboration solemnly all are stars i am lucky to have all of u ...........n today i announce myself gr8 fan of all 3 genious...........realy beautiful

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  10. ohh no yaar...u r my fan only..!! hahaha....

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